Research note

Structural review of empirical chapters 4 and 5

Review of empirical chapters #3X7JKL (ch. 4) and #F2943E (ch. 5) against theoretical framework #W8HHQV

CHAPTER 4 — structural issues:

CHAPTER 4 — theoretical connections to add:

  • Welch et al. (2020) / Askholm (2024) on reflexive 2nd-gen practice theory (already set up in #6VBDKY perfect for 4.5 quiet vs reflected sustainability.

  • Nicolini (2017) on practice bundles/complexes #RDZMW6 use it explicitly when introducing the chapter — Brīvbode IS a bundle site.

  • Gregson (2007) on divestment as ordering work: pull the richer version (chapter 2 #5M9UV4 forward to opening of 4.1.

CHAPTER 5 — structural issues:

  • Wheeler & Glucksmann’s three-dimension framework is announced #DKNKM6 but only Modal (5.3) and Processual (5.4) get section headings. Section 5.2 “Valuation work without the context of price” IS the technical labour section in disguise — rename it to make the framework visible.

  • 5.1 (sufficiency lifestyle) sits outside the three-dimension scheme. Either explicitly frame as structural precondition, or integrate into modal labour.

  • Conclusion is a mess: #GGGPNV nested wrongly under 5.4 with good paragraphs #8JXBYH and #T5LNZ9 Below them duplicate conclusions #WQCQ9A #ENZMT5 #JJA5J6 say the same thing. Orphan notes #ANCRJA #YNFMZ5 #H77SJA #MC4GH7 #QJNPTQ #GDAK2E need integrating into body or cutting. Promote #GGGPNV to top-level 5.5; delete duplicates.

  • Aiga “thirty trips” passage in #DGLFX7 should open the logistics-node discussion, not close it.

CHAPTER 5 — theoretical connections to add:

  • Reno (2016) on women as moral agents (set up in chapter 2 #U9VL8L — connects to Aiga’s “inner feeling” that won’t let her throw out.

  • Lindsay et al. (2024) and Organo et al. (2013) on sustainability labour absorbed into gendered domestic work #9NPNTZ flagged as needing checking) — for #LQTPNH (Kristīne and daughters) and #T5LNZ9

  • Beswick-Parsons et al. (2025) decanting/stock management/recirculating vocabulary — name in 5.2.

CROSS-CHAPTER:

  • Madara “brīv → exchange” passage doubled at #ZC2Z2F (ch.4) and #MSGHYR (ch.5). Make one primary, the other a brief callback.