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can you read though ch4 of the new 4V8VH7 draft, also read ch5 for the vibe cuz that one is more redrafted and edited and polished now, but yeah so in ch4 there's a bunch to do but especially we are wondering about clearly integrating the shove 2012 into this chapter so let's go through the throughline of ch4 and talk about shove 2012 etc

Reading Practices of Divestment, Acquisition and Circulation of Thi…'s outline outline with 9 sections
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Read both. Ch5 has that clean spine where every section names a concept and walks empirics through it; Ch4 has the same bones but the framework is implicit — you’re using Shove vocabulary throughout without ever cashing it in. Let me lay out the throughline and the Shove 2012 moves.

Ch4’s actual throughline

The chapter is already structured around Shove’s three elements — you just don’t say so:

Section	Shove 2012 element
§4.1 Incoming Flow #2JEZWG	divestment as a practice with its own materials/meanings/competencies that connects to freecycling
§4.2 Site as Active Flow #PBFQ5E	materials (site, infrastructure, layout, overflow)
§4.3 Reading the Room #QP7HMF	competencies (sorting, evaluating, reading quality, “reading the room”)
§4.4 Not a Charity #PZH45P	meanings as normative — the moral economy that organisers maintain
§4.5 Letting Go #7Z8WUY	competency of detachment + meanings of attachment without price
§4.6 What People Find Here #W2WRDC	meanings as plural — how heterogeneous meanings recruit carriers
§4.7 Quiet/Reflected Sustainability #GTJY22	meanings vs. doings (also Shove territory)

And the intro #PL9BXR already promises the practice-entity vs. practice-as-performance distinction, which is straight Shove/Schatzki. So the framework is doing work; it’s just not labelled.

Where to integrate Shove 2012 explicitly

1. Chapter intro #PL9BXR — non-negotiable cite. You name “materials… meanings… competencies” and “practice-entity / performance” without naming Shove. One sentence anchoring the analytic frame here (“Following Shove et al. (2012), I treat freecycling as constituted by the integration of material elements, meanings, and competencies, examining it both as practice-entity and as performance…”) would make the rest of the chapter legible as a structured analysis instead of seven loosely linked vignettes. This is the single highest-leverage edit.

2. §4.2 #PBFQ5E — materials as the element that holds practices in place. The closing scene #PNCAWA where people keep dropping things off after the site closes is a textbook Shove moment: it shows how effectively the practice has recruited carriers, and how the trajectories of elements (the divestment habit) outlive the configuration (the site itself). #LHLZ8Y on “stable and recurring weekly infrastructure” is also asking to be tied to Shove’s account of material infrastructure as constitutive, not background. You already cite Shove 2016 on infrastructure in ch2 #3JUPW7 — bring it down here.

3. §4.3 #QP7HMF — competencies. This section has a lot of fragments ( #MQPMT2 onward is bullet-y). Shove 2012’s account of competencies as transferable, learnable, and acquired through performance would anchor it. #CUBS5Q (Madara learning to inhabit the value regime) is explicitly narrated as competency acquisition — you even use the word. Naming Shove here would let you organise the bullet list around: evaluative competence, material literacy, self-knowledge, situational reading. The drafty bullets are actually all instances of one Shove move.

4. §4.5 #7Z8WUY — the self-management work bullets. Same issue: #F6TNUS , #7397K7 , #PYSU33 are fragments that name a real competency (deliberate self-regulation in the absence of price). Shove on competencies acquired through repeated performance fits directly. Also: Māra “developing the capacity to let go” ( #LG8X4N , #35KR5F ) — pure Shove competency-acquisition language.

5. §4.6 #W2WRDC — meanings recruit carriers. Your opening claim #5L3QYB (“heterogeneity of meanings allows the practice to recruit across a wide and socially diverse public”) is a direct Shove 2012 argument. Cite it. This also lets you frame the stigma material ( #86WW2X , #ZEVQDB ) as a meaning that blocks recruitment for some carriers — that’s a Shove move about why practices fail to spread.

6. §4.7 #GTJY22 — already has #FLSHWG saying “‘doings’ hold the centre” which is Shove-via-Warde. Currently uncited there. One Shove cite would tie quiet sustainability back into the practice-theoretical frame instead of letting Smith & Jehlička carry it alone.

7. Conclusion #A3X9XX . “Holding together incompatible orientations” is exactly the claim that a practice can persist via plural, non-coherent meaning configurations as long as the elements stay linked. Closing the loop with Shove there mirrors how ch5 closes with Wheeler & Glucksmann.

The bigger structural suggestion

You already have one #CLU5VP citation of Shove on the migration of meanings across practices (the darning/divestment example). That’s actually a bigger idea than its current placement — it’s the engine of how thrift, sustainability, and care meanings keep recombining in Brīvbode. Could be flagged in the intro as a recurring move, then it gets paid off in §4.1, §4.5, §4.7.

Concrete next move

If you want the fastest win: rewrite the chapter intro #PL9BXR – #L252MY to explicitly name the Shove framework and signpost the three-element structure. That alone will make every section read as part of a coherent argument, and you won’t need to retrofit cites in every subsection — one good anchor up front + the existing #CLU5VP + a closing nod in #A3X9XX may be enough. The drafty competency bullets in §4.3 and the self-management bullets in §4.5 are the second-priority cleanup, where Shove also helps you organise.

Want me to draft a revised intro paragraph for #PL9BXR that anchors the Shove frame and previews the three-element structure?

ah yeah btw i am going to shortly apply these suggestions and draft translations etc to generally improve the chapter, so; §4.2.2 (or new §4.3) “Competencies of Circulation” — prose draft This replaces the bullet-list block. Three paragraphs, integrating the same empirical material as running prose. The competencies that sustain freecycling in Brīvbode are largely social and evaluative rather than technical, and none of them require formal training — but each is acquired through repeated participation and is unevenly distributed across practitioners. Material literacy — recognising wool from synthetic fibres, identifying well-made construction, spotting a hidden stain — is foundational, and volunteers develop it most acutely through handling what arrives. Rasa, in the recollection of one student researcher who spent time in the shop, has “the most trained eye for the quality of things” [visuztrenētākā acs uz mantu kvalitāti]; her own acquisition criteria turn on fibre type and durability, preferring what is “more nature-friendly, ecological, and long-lasting.” Visitors develop a more limited version of the same competency. Laura describes herself as a careful second-hand user who checks everything thoroughly, though she admits she has still occasionally taken home items that turned out to be broken on closer inspection. On the acquisition side, competence also means knowing when to come and how to navigate the space. Agate has mapped the visitor typology and times her arrivals strategically; Marta describes starting in the first room and returning when something new has arrived. Equally important is the negative competency of not taking — knowing what one needs and what one already has. Zane keeps a list on her phone of items she is actively looking for, and her stylist consultations work as an investment in self-knowledge that guards against impulsive acquisition. Agate explicitly asks herself while browsing whether a given item could be combined with what she already owns. This is cognitive work — holding a mental model of one’s wardrobe and household — and without it, acquisition becomes impulsive and the divestment work follows. The competencies of acquisition and divestment are therefore inseparable: each unconsidered acquisition becomes future divestment labour. On the divesting side, the practice expects items to arrive clean and in reasonable condition, requiring washing, stain-checking, and sometimes minor repair, though norms vary: Marija leaves the washing to the recipient, while Anna says she never divests anything that has been repaired. The boundary between “ready to circulate” and “needs more work first” is itself negotiated through the practice. That’s about 280 words and covers material literacy, navigation/timing, restraint and self-knowledge, mental models, and cleaning/preparing — all the bullet points, but as argument-bearing prose rather than a list. Latvian translations For an anthropology thesis with a Latvian fieldsite, keeping both languages is appropriate — preserves the participants’ voices and signals the ethnographic register. Below is each quote with a translation. You can present these as either: Latvian first, English in brackets after (standard ethnographic convention), or English in main text, Latvian in a footnote (cleaner reading flow, especially if there are many quotes). I’d suggest the first for short pithy quotes (where the Latvian word matters — brīv, krājēja, tante ar trīs maisiem) and the second for longer narrative passages. §4.2.2 — Madara on freeness “Man kaut kā mazāka vēlme ņemt visu, ko es redzu, par spīti tam, ka tas it kā ir tas ‘brīv’… es kaut kā vairāk cienu to visu, kas tur ir izlikts.” [I somehow feel less desire to take everything I see, despite the fact that it’s all “free” — I somehow have more respect for everything that’s laid out there.] “Kādam varbūt tas ‘brīv’ rada vēlmi, ka viss ir bez maksas, tagad ņemam, ņemam, ņemam. Man tas nospēlē kaut kā tieši otrādāk.” [For some, maybe “free” creates the urge that everything is free, so now we take, take, take. For me it works the opposite way.] “Es to uztveru kā apmaiņu. To vārdu ‘brīvu’ kaut kā izslēdzu… Sākumā tas tā bišķiņ mulsināja, ka esmu kā apzagusies.” [I see it as exchange. I somehow switch off the word “free”… At first it was a bit confusing, as if I had stolen something.] Note: you’ve already translated the third quote in §5.2 (“At first it felt a bit like I was stealing”) — keep the wording consistent across the two chapters. §4.3 — Madara on impulse-acquiring “Man bija ļoti daudz dažādu veidu… pēdējos pāris gadus es kaut kā esmu no tā atkāvusies, ka es tā vairs nedaru. Es tiešām ļoti izvērtēju, vai man tā lieta tiešām ir nepieciešama.” [I used to have so many different kinds of things… in the last couple of years I’ve somehow weaned myself off it; I no longer do that. I really do evaluate whether the thing is genuinely necessary for me.] “Es tiešām cenšos nebūt tā tante ar trīs maisiem, kas staigā katru dienu tur no vienas točkas uz otru. To es cenšos nepieļaut un cenšos arī sadraudzēties maksimāli ar tām lietām, kas man ir.” [I really try not to be that auntie with three bags who walks every day from one spot to another. I try to avoid that, and try to make peace as much as I can with the things I already have.] Note: “tante ar trīs maisiem” is a culturally specific image — the figure of the woman with multiple shopping bags rotating through second-hand outlets. Worth keeping in Latvian and translating literally; you could add a brief gloss like “the figure of the heavy-taking second-hand regular.” §4.3 — Elīna on having enough Interviewer: “Bet kā tu nonāci pie tās sajūtas, pie tās atziņas – man jau pietiek?” Elīna: “Man vienkārši skapī vairs nav vietas. (smejas) Nu, arī, teiksim, tagad ir ziema, un ir džemperu laiks, un es saprotu, ka es tāpat neuzvelku visus savus džemperus. Nu, tātad man viņu ir acīmredzami par daudz. Un man arī patīk novalkāt lietas. Tur ir kaut kāds tāds, nu, man vismaz, īpašs tā kā kaifs, ka es ar šo lietu esmu tik daudz lietas darījusi kopā, ka viņa ir tik novalkāta, ka viņu, iespējams, pat vairs nevar salabot.” [Interviewer: But how did you arrive at that feeling, that realisation — I already have enough? Elīna: There’s simply no more space in my wardrobe. (laughs) Well — say it’s winter now, sweater season, and I realise I don’t wear all my sweaters anyway. So I obviously have too many of them. And I also like wearing things out. There’s a kind of — well, for me at least, a special pleasure when I’ve gone through so much with a thing that it’s worn down to the point where maybe it can’t even be repaired anymore.] §4.3 — Aiga on hoarding and letting go “Es esmu krājēja. Jā, es esmu krājēja.” [I’m a hoarder. Yes, I’m a hoarder.] “Es aizbraucu, un tad ar to arī sākās, ka tagad, nu, tagad tas ir izdarīts, tagad ir jādomā kaut kas par lietām, kas ir par daudz.” [I went away [on the trip], and that’s when it started — that now, well, it’s been done, and now I have to think something about the things that are too many.] “Es labāk šobrīd lēnā garā atbrīvojos… man nav vienkārši žēl paņemt somu un aizbraukt.” [I’d rather let go of things slowly now… I just don’t want it to be hard to pick up a bag and leave.] Note: “krājēja” is feminine for “one who collects/hoards” — the word carries both the neutral “saver/collector” sense and the more anxious “hoarder” sense. Worth keeping. §4.3 — Māra on attachment as ongoing work “Pieķeršanās jautājums tiek risināts. Viņš ir procesā.” [The question of attachment is being worked on. It’s in process.] “Brīvbode palīdz, tā teikt, šim procesam attīstīties.” [Brīvbode helps, so to speak, this process to develop.] “Šobrīd jau ir uz robežas, tāpēc es saku, ka ir jāatvadās jau no tā, kas jau ir atrasts.” [I’m already at the edge now, that’s why I say one has to start saying goodbye even to what one has already found.] §4.5 — Māra on her mother’s generation “Mammai to lietu nebija daudz, un tās lietas tika visas, nu, ļoti labi uzturētas. Bet tad, kad jau parādījās tie humāno preču veikali, tad savukārt bija otrā drusku galējība.” [My mother didn’t have many things, and those things were all, well, very well looked after. But then, once the second-hand goods shops [humāno preču veikali, lit. “humanitarian goods shops”] appeared, the other extreme came.] Note: “humāno preču veikali” is the colloquial Latvian term for second-hand/charity shops — literally “humanitarian goods shops” because they originated in 1990s post-Soviet Latvia partly through Western humanitarian aid. Worth a brief footnote to gloss this for non-Latvian readers; it carries historical weight that “second-hand shop” doesn’t. Practical recommendations For the bullet list: drop in the prose draft above; delete the bullet block; the section becomes substantially shorter and reads as argument rather than notes. For the Latvian quotes: pick one presentation convention and apply it consistently across both chapters (you already do this in §5 for English quotes — Anna, Aiga). Latvian-first-with-English-in-brackets is the most ethnographically standard. Two terms deserve a footnote: tante ar trīs maisiem (the figure of the heavy-taking second-hand regular) and humāno preču veikali (the post-Soviet origin of second-hand shops in Latvia). Both carry context that flat translation loses. Use translations consistently between chapters — Madara’s “stealing” line appears in both §4 and §5; the wording should match.

This is a strong package — the prose draft does exactly what bullet sections in a thesis chapter need to do (turn enumeration into argument), and the translation conventions you’re proposing are the right ones for an anthropology thesis. A few observations and one structural flag:

On the prose draft for competencies

It works well as a replacement for the bullet block #MQPMT2 – #J4CQAN . A couple of small things to consider as you drop it in:

The middle paragraph already lands the line “competencies of acquisition and divestment are inseparable: each unconsidered acquisition becomes future divestment labour.” That’s a quietly important claim and it echoes #VXG4LU in §4.5 (“if acquisition carries less commitment, the same conditions that make divestment easier may make acquisition more frequent and less deliberate”). Worth making sure these two passages know about each other — either cross-reference or let §4.5 build on the claim made here.
The final paragraph on cleaning/preparing is shorter than the other two and ends a bit abruptly. If you want it to carry the same weight, one closing sentence tying preparation back to the negotiated threshold theme from #F9CK8T / #YNY54V would close the section: the threshold of “ready to circulate” isn’t fixed, it’s what the situational norms in §4.3’s first half are about. That would also make §4.3 cohere as one section rather than two halves (norms, then competencies).
The orphan #J4CQAN bullet (“on material literacy…”) looks like a quote you were going to integrate — your prose draft now covers that ground, so it can go.

On the Latvian conventions

Your two-tier rule (Latvian-first-bracket-English for short pithy quotes where the word matters; English-main-Latvian-footnote for longer narrative) is exactly right and is what readers of ethnography expect. The footnote-worthy terms you flagged — tante ar trīs maisiem, humāno preču veikali, krājēja — are all doing real cultural-historical work that flat translation flattens. Humāno preču veikali especially: the 1990s humanitarian-aid origin is part of why second-hand carries the class stigma it does in §4.6 #86WW2X , so that footnote is actually load-bearing for an argument later in the chapter, not just a translator’s nicety.

One small consistency check: Madara’s “stealing” line — in your draft here you have “At first it was a bit confusing, as if I had stolen something” and in #4HW9DD (ch5) you have “At first it felt a bit like I was stealing.” Pick one and use it both places. The ch5 version is punchier.

Also: #CUBS5Q currently has both Latvian and English commentary interleaved in one paragraph. When you apply the convention, that block will need to be split into the quote(s) + your analytic prose around them, otherwise the formatting will fight itself.

One structural flag while you’re in there

While editing §4.3, notice that the section is currently doing two things: norms of acceptability (gendered material, situational standards, food, medicine — #TDQ4JL through #CUBS5Q ) and competencies of circulation (your new prose draft). The section title “Reading the Room: Norms and Competencies of Circulation” already promises both, but right now the join between them is a single floating heading-like paragraph #MQPMT2 (“Competencies of Circulation”) that reads as a leftover scaffolding marker. Once you drop in the prose draft, consider:

either keeping it as one section with a one-sentence pivot (“If norms define what counts as acceptable, the competencies examined below are how participants come to read those norms…”),
or splitting into §4.3 Norms and §4.4 Competencies, which would make the chapter’s three-element scaffolding (materials → competencies → meanings) even more visible.

Given the Shove framework anchoring conversation we just had, splitting might actually pay off — it would let §4.3 be cleanly “norms/situational standards” (which is partly a meanings section, normative meanings) and §4.4 be cleanly “competencies.” But that’s a bigger move; one-sentence pivot is the safer edit if you’re racing the deadline.

Go forth and apply. The chapter is in better shape than the bullet residue makes it look.