there are two versions of the thesis in the workspace, a DRAFT (ieva’s) and MIKAEL tagged one, we’re thinking of taking chapter 5 and using it in ieva’s draft, but can you read through and see what’s the difference and if they’re kinda compatible, etc?
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Keeping It Moving and Holding It Together: An Ethnography of Brīvbode, a Riga Swapshop#4V8VH7 2026 Lange Ieva Lange Masters thesis nil pp. mikaelKeeping It Moving and Holding It Together: An Ethnography of Brīvbode, a Riga Swapshop#WG8SNC 2026 Lange Ieva Lange Masters thesis nil pp. draft'Saving' the city: Collective low-budget organising and urban practice#QUD55H 2015 Otto, Vollmer, Derwanz, Bialski Birke Otto, Hans Vollmer, Heike Derwanz, Paula Bialski Journal article 20 pp. nilA Critical Review of the Role of Repair Cafés in a Sustainable Circular Transition#K52UPR 2021 Mosgaard, Moalem Mette Alberg Mosgaard, Rikke Marie Moalem Journal article 26 pp. nilAcknowledging Consumption: A Review of New Studies#GABXSA 1995 Miller Daniel Miller Book 350 pp. nilAfter Practice? Material Semiotic Approaches to Consumption and Economy#4EFC4F 2020 Evans David M. Evans Journal article 17 pp. nilAfter taste: Culture, consumption and theories of practice#9D34UM 2014 Warde Alan Warde Journal article 25 pp. nilAn order of distinction (or, how to tell a collection from a hoard)#5Y2AD9 2018 Kilroy-Marac Katie Kilroy-Marac Journal article 19 pp. nil+122 more documents -
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Introduction
- 1.1 Study context and research questions
- 1.2 Latvian context and research
- 1.3 A note on terms
- 1.4 The structure of the thesis
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Practice, Consumption and Its Work: A Theoretical Framework
- 2.1 Theories of Practice
- 2.2 Theories of Practice to Study Alternative Practices?
- 2.3 Consumption practices
- 2.4 Consumption Work
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Ethnography of Practice in Brīvbode
- 3.1 The site
- 3.2 Setting the scene: A day in Brīvbode
- 3.3 Ethnography of Practice
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Participant observation
- 3.4.1 Fieldwork diary
- 3.5 Interviews
- 3.6 Data analysis
- 3.7 Research ethics
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The Circulation of Things in Brīvbode and Things That Sustain It
- 4.1 Incoming Flow: Divestment From Home
- 4.2 Materials in Brīvbode: Co-presence and Flow
- 4.3 Reading the Room: Norms and Competencies of Circulation
- 4.4 Not a Charity: The Moral Economy of Exchange
- 4.5 Letting Go: Attachment Without Price
- 4.6 What People Find Here: Plural Meanings of Acquisition
- 4.7 Quiet or Reflected Sustainability?
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The Work of Circular Consumption
- 5.1 Priceless Valuation: Sorting, Curation, and Care
- 5.2 Time to Give: Volunteers and Sufficiency Lifestyle
- 5.3 Modal labour across socioeconomic modes
- 5.4 Processual labour: exchange networks and gendered work
- 6 Conclusion
- 7 SUMMARY
- 8 LIST OF SOURCES
- 9 KOKKUVÕTE
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Introduction
- 1.1 Latvian context and research
- 1.2 A note on terms
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Practice Theory and Consumption Work
- 2.1 Theories of Practice
- 2.2 Retheorizing Practices
- 2.3 Consumption as a Moment of Practices
- 2.4 Consumption Work
- 2.5 Sites of Interacting Practices
- 2.6 Conclusion
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Research Methodology: Participating in Practice
- 3.1 The site
- 3.2 Setting the scene: A day in Brīvbode
- 3.3 Ethnography of Practice
- 3.4 Participant observation
- 3.5 Interviews
- 3.6 Data analysis
- 3.7 Research ethics
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Keep It Moving: the Circulation of Practices
- 4.1 Varieties of Divestment
- 4.2 Sorting the Shelves
- 4.3 Reading the Room
- 4.4 "We are not a charity!"
- 4.5 Values of Letting Go
- 4.6 Taking Things, Seriously
- 4.7 Quiet, Sustainability
- 4.8 Conclusion
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Hold It Together: Consumption Work as Care
- 5.1 Time to Give, Time to Live
- 5.2 Caring for Priceless Things
- 5.3 Informal Modes of Labour
- 5.4 Women and the Work of Networks
- 5.5 Conclusion
- 6 CONCLUSION
- 7 LIST OF SOURCES
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#8N6PWM doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / The Work of Circular ConsumptionRasa, the principal manager of Brīvbode, compared the swapshop’s operation to the flight of a bumblebee: while seemingly defyng the laws of aerodynamics, it somehow manages to fly in practice. The comparison foregrounds the felt fragility of the initiative, even though it has operated consistently for years now. This chapter examines the work that keeps Brīvbode running. Where the previous chapter examined how freecycling is constituted as a social practice, in this chapter I want to foreground what that practice costs and how the work is distributed across participants in different socioeconomic modes.
#P6G4ZM doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / The Work of Circular ConsumptionThe chapter is organized by two complementary registers. Consumption work (Wheeler and Glucksmann 2015) names the tasks the practice demands – acquiring, sorting, maintaining, divesting, transporting – and tracks how they are distributed across technical, modal, and processual dimensions of the division of labour. Care work, in the feminist tradition and its recent applications to circular consumption (Mesiranta et al. 2025; Tölg and Fuentes 2025), names the relational and ethical orientation through which participants take this labour on, often without recognising it as work at all.
#CDN38A doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / The Work of Circular ConsumptionIn circular economy contexts, becoming a circular consumer requires varied and unevenly distributed forms of consumption work whose nature and scope have been underplayed in circular economy debates, but which has significant implications for whether such initiatives can succeed (Hobson et al., 2021). As Mesiranta et al. (2025: 25) observe, even frontrunner consumers who have integrated circular practices into their lives perceive them as laborious and at times troublesome.
#6A7QBT doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / The Work of Circular ConsumptionWork and care are close and overlapping concepts in this account. As Bankovska (2020: 13) observes in her ethnography of the Latvian organic food movement, drawing on Graeber (2018: 156), care is not always a joyful or pleasant act – it involves unanticipated effort, obligation, hesitation, and sometimes disgust. In this sense care resembles work: activities performed because they need to be done rather than because they are intrinsically rewarding. The chapter uses consumption work as its organising framework while recognising that the boundaries between consumption work, volunteer labour, and care work are difficult to discern in practice.
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I read both Chapter 5s end to end. Here’s the comparison.
What they share
Both chapters are organised by Wheeler and Glucksmann’s three dimensions of consumption work (technical/valuation, modal, processual), use the same core fieldwork material (Anna on bag quality, Rasa’s “filter,” Madara’s “I switch off the word free,” the welded stove, Aiga’s thirty trips, Kristīne’s daughters, Anna “It’s on me,” Māra as logistics node), and lean on the same scaffolding of references (Mesiranta et al. 2025, Tölg & Fuentes 2025, Hobson 2020/2021, Tan & Yeoh 2024, Beswick-Parsons et al. 2025, Miller 1998, Bankovska 2020, Graeber 2018). The bumblebee opener and the sufficiency/volunteer argument are nearly word-for-word in places.
What’s different
Frame and title. Ieva’s draft is “The Work of Circular Consumption” — the work is the subject. MIKAEL’s is “Hold It Together: Consumption Work as Care” — work and care as paired registers, with the chapter explicitly framed as the second half of a Keep It Moving / Hold It Together pair.
Section order and shape.
Draft: Valuation → Sufficiency/volunteers → Modal → Processual. No conclusion.
MIKAEL: Sufficiency → Valuation → Modal → Processual → Conclusion .
Leading with sufficiency lets MIKAEL set up “time-rich, sufficiency-oriented lives” as the structural condition for all the work that follows, and the conclusion pulls the three dimensions back together. The draft just stops.
Polish.
Draft still has ~10 paragraphs tagged fragment, placeholder, or needs_revision — untranslated Latvian quotes
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the literal placeholder “BURDEN”
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and the question to self “Is it too vague to apply circular economy and consumption work to Brīvbode?”
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MIKAEL is clean prose throughout.
Theoretical integration. MIKAEL pulls Tölg’s evaluation/valorising distinction into the valuation section, repeatedly returns to Bankovska’s “care not-work” as a thread, and ends each section with a synthesising sentence linking work and care. The draft cites the same authors but the synthesis sentences aren’t there yet.
Content MIKAEL drops. The draft’s tail includes material that’s not in MIKAEL: the Berlin swapshop comparison , the Repair Café observations , the moral-economies-of-restraint coda, Aiga on hoarding and war anxiety , Māra on letting-go-as-process , and “Brīvbode as infrastructure for letting go” . Some of this is genuinely valuable and not duplicated elsewhere.
Compatibility with your draft
Mostly yes, with three real frictions:
Cross-references. MIKAEL says “Chapter 4 followed the things and the elements of practice through Brīvbode and showed how the bundle of freecycling coordinates several practices at once .” That “bundle” language belongs to MIKAEL’s Chapter 2 ( Retheorizing Practices, Sites of Interacting Practices) and his Chapter 4 framing. Your Chapter 2 and Chapter 4 don’t set up the bundle vocabulary the same way. You’d need to either (a) tweak that opener to match your Chapter 4’s “how freecycling is constituted as a social practice” framing — which is what your draft already says — or (b) import some of the bundle framing into earlier chapters.
Title coupling. “Hold It Together” is the back half of MIKAEL’s “Keeping It Moving and Holding It Together” thesis title and “Keep It Moving” Chapter 4. If you adopt MIKAEL’s Chapter 5 title as-is it will feel orphaned next to your Chapter 4 “The Circulation of Things…” Either re-title the chapter or borrow the Keep/Hold pairing for Chapter 4 too.
Salvage list. Before swapping, decide what to do with the draft-only material — Berlin comparison, the hoarding/war-anxiety/attachment cluster , and the moral-economies-of-restraint coda. Some belongs in Chapter 4 (letting go is already your §4.5 ), some could be folded into MIKAEL’s processual section as additional empirical depth.
Concrete next step
Importing MIKAEL’s Chapter 5 is a real upgrade in polish, organisation, and theoretical synthesis, and it’s substantively faithful to the same argument and material. The cleanest path: paste in MIKAEL’s chapter, rewrite the opening paragraph to match your existing Chapter 2/4 vocabulary, retitle to fit your thesis title, and graft the salvageable letting-go/hoarding paragraphs from your draft into the processual section or back into Chapter 4. Want me to draft a revised opening paragraph that bridges MIKAEL’s chapter to your existing Chapter 2 and Chapter 4?
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#NDFZY6 doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / Practice, Consumption and Its Work: A Theoretical FrameworkThis chapter develops a theoretical framework for the thesis, connecting several bodies of work: a practice-theoretical approach to consumption with a focus not only on acquisition and attachment, but also divestment and disposal, and consumption work as a framework for naming the labour that circulation demands and examining how it is distributed.
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#YQKL3Z doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / Practice, Consumption and Its Work: A Theoretical Framework / Theories of PracticeThe central theoretical grounding for this thesis is practice theory – or rather theories of practice – a heterogeneous cluster of approaches in humanities and social sciences in which practice serves as the primary unit of analysis for understanding human life and sociality. Shifting away from individual motivations and attitudes, behaviours and choices (ABC) based models for change, for example, practice theory rather examines how those doings are organized socially. It enables looking at the interconnectedness of the social and material realms with an emphasis on the role of objects, infrastructures and technology in practice enactment and maintenance. Evolved in a lineage from Bourdieu (1977) and Giddens (1984) in social sciences, in the past decades theories of practice have been influential and applied across various domains in social sciences and humanities, constituting what has been called a practice turn (Warde, 2014).
#A7Z4Z5 doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / Practice, Consumption and Its Work: A Theoretical Framework / Theories of PracticeWhile varied definitions of social practice exist, Warde suggests a minimal definition: “An organized, and recognizable, socially shared bundle of activities that involves the integration of a complex array of components: material, embodied, ideational and affective. Practices are sets of ‘doings and sayings’; they involve both practical activity and its representations" (Warde, 2005: 134).
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Here’s a revised opening for Chapter 5 that drops the “bundle / practice-arrangement” vocabulary MIKAEL imports from his Chapter 2/4 and instead bridges to your existing Chapter 4 (, organised by materials, meanings, competencies) and Chapter 2 (, where you already set up consumption work as complementary to practice theory and name the technical/modal/processual dimensions). It would replace MIKAEL’s , , and .
Paragraph 1 (replaces )
Rasa, the principal manager of Brīvbode, compared the swapshop’s operation to the flight of a bumblebee: while seemingly defying the laws of aerodynamics, it nevertheless continues to fly. This chapter examines the work that keeps it flying. Where the previous chapter followed things through Brīvbode and showed how the materials, meanings, and competencies of freecycling hang together as a practice, this chapter turns to what holding that practice in working relation costs and to the people who pay for it — in time, skill, and effort, and in the relational and ethical attention that the tasks of circulation demand. That labour is largely unpaid, unevenly distributed, and absorbed into existing practices of household management.
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The chapter is organised by two complementary registers introduced in Chapter 2. Consumption work (Wheeler and Glucksmann 2015) names the tasks the practice demands — acquiring, sorting, maintaining, divesting, transporting — and tracks how they are distributed across the technical, modal, and processual dimensions of the division of labour. Care work, in the feminist tradition and its recent applications to circular consumption (Mesiranta et al. 2025; Tölg and Fuentes 2025), names the relational and ethical orientation through which participants take this labour on, often without recognising it as work at all. The two registers are not alternatives but coordinates: a practice like freecycling in Brīvbode is held together at once by tasks that need doing and by the dispositions through which people make them their own.
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Bankovska’s (2020) ethnography of the Latvian organic food movement bridges the two registers ethnographically. Drawing on Graeber (2018: 156), she observes that care is not always a joyful act but often involves unanticipated effort, obligation, hesitation, and disgust — labour that has to be done because the alternative is unbearable. The boundaries between consumption work, care work, and volunteer work are difficult to maintain in practice, and that is precisely what allows the labour that sustains Brīvbode to remain largely invisible to participants and to circular economy policy alike (Hobson et al. 2021).
What I changed and why
“bundle of freecycling coordinates several practices at once” → “materials, meanings, and competencies of freecycling hang together as a practice” — matches your Chapter 4’s three-element analytical frame and uses Shove et al.’s “hang together” language you already cite in .
“practice-arrangement bundles like Brīvbode” → “a practice like freecycling in Brīvbode” — drops Schatzkian vocabulary your Chapter 2 doesn’t set up.
Added “introduced in Chapter 2” — anchors the work/care pairing in your and where you already say consumption work names what circulation costs and is complementary to practice theory.
Kept MIKAEL’s third paragraph nearly verbatim — Bankovska/Graeber/Hobson is already on your shelf and you cite all three.
Two small downstream things to watch when you paste in the rest of MIKAEL’s chapter:
opens “If §5.2 traced the valuation work the absence of price creates…” — that’s MIKAEL’s section order. In your numbering it would be §5.2 if you keep MIKAEL’s order (Sufficiency → Valuation → Modal → Processual), or you’d need to renumber if you reorder.
Chapter title. “Hold It Together: Consumption Work as Care” assumes the Keep/Hold pairing. If you want to keep your existing thesis title and Chapter 4 title, something like “The Work of Circulation: Consumption Work as Care” preserves MIKAEL’s analytical move without requiring the title-level pairing.
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#ET5CGT doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / Introduction / Study context and research questionsWe live in a context of overproduction. Goods, especially textiles, move through households at increasing speed while the average use time continues to drop (Ellen MacArthur Foundation, 2019). Circular economy policies increasingly position wider reuse and extended product lifetimes as responses to the environmental costs associated with these patterns, yet their success depends on everyday practices that are labour-intensive and socially uneven (Hobson et al., 2021).
#ULMUVH doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / Introduction / Study context and research questionsHobson et al. (2021) encourage research into circular economy consumption work “beyond the domestic sphere and space of the household” to examine consumption-based practices in other spaces where individuals come together around circular practices, regardless of whether these activities are explicitly labeled as “circular economy”. Other authors have reinforced this call for studies of community based dimensions of circular consumption (Luukkonen et al., 2024, Mesiranta et al., 2025). This thesis is an ethnographic study of a circular community initiative – the social practice of freecycling – the circulation of things within a non-monetary context – in Brīvbode, a volunteer-run swapshop1 in Riga. Brīvbode operates outside the formal circular economy framework: it is a “shop” without formal market transactions, no producer responsibility schemes or measured material flows. Yet it keeps secondhand goods in local circulation and fits within the principles of extending object lifetimes and keeping materials in use.
#YD7C7G doc #WG8SNC paragraph NORMAL_TEXTCirculation of Things in a Swapshop in Riga, Latvia / Introduction / Study context and research questionsThe study is situated in a changing practice landscape. Latvia introduced mandatory textile collection in 2023, new secondhand sales platforms are expanding the routes available for sequential flows of household goods, swapping and reuse initiatives have multiplied in Riga and beyond in recent years. A study of Brīvbode contributes to understanding this changing practice landscape by offering an empirical account of one specific site where divestment, acquisition, and non-monetary exchange come together.
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Read both. Here’s the breakdown.
Introductions
The big conceptual fork. Ieva’s intro frames freecycling as a practice constituted by materials, meanings, and competencies (Shove et al.). MIKAEL’s intro reframes it as a bundle/nexus of multiple practices (Schatzki, Nicolini) — household divestment, wardrobe management, repair, craft, sociality, volunteering, sufficiency, sorting, resale — coordinated at one site. This is in , , , and reflects in MIKAEL’s RQ1 (“How is freecycling — as a bundle of practices coordinated at Brīvbode — organised…”).
This fork propagates everywhere: into MIKAEL’s Chapter 2 ( Sites of Interacting Practices), Chapter 4 framing (“Keep It Moving: the Circulation of Practices”), Chapter 5 opener (“the bundle of freecycling coordinates several practices at once”), and Conclusion. It’s the conceptual spine of MIKAEL’s version.
What’s basically identical / safe to lift:
The Latvian context section — nearly word-for-word in both. MIKAEL adds one nice paragraph (, oddly tagged placeholder) about “a patchwork of routes rather than a single circular system” — worth pulling into your draft as it cleans up the parallel
needs_revision/placeholder paragraphs in your section .A note on terms — virtually identical, both are clean.
The structure-of-the-thesis paragraph — identical.
What’s worth lifting from MIKAEL even without adopting bundle framing:
The opening sentence cluster : “the moral burden of managing what arrives and what leaves has shifted increasingly onto households themselves” is sharper than your and sets up the consumption work argument earlier.
: a tight one-paragraph description of what Brīvbode actually is (location, twice a week, year-round, what people do, what volunteers do). Your draft doesn’t have this kind of compressed scene-setter; it would replace your fragmentary well.
What you’d have to refuse from MIKAEL’s intro if you don’t adopt bundle framing:
, , — the three paragraphs that introduce nexus/bundle/site ontology, Schatzki, “elements of practice travel alongside the things.” These are MIKAEL’s signature analytical move.
The reformulated RQ1.
Conclusions
Ieva’s conclusion is roughly twice as long as MIKAEL’s and clearly mid-draft: ~10 fragment/placeholder/needs_revision tags, several paragraphs that say overlapping things (“Circular consumption requires substantial labor; that labor is unevenly distributed…” appears in three different formulations), and an untranslated Latvian quote. There are good lines in there but the structure isn’t pulled together yet.
MIKAEL’s conclusion is seven polished paragraphs with a clean arc:
— Brīvbode as nexus/bundle (Schatzki + Hobson’s generative spaces) — bundle-dependent
— two simultaneous circulations: things + elements of practice — bundle-dependent
— heterogeneous meanings + quiet sustainability — portable
— removing price redistributes work; consumption work + care — portable , pairs perfectly with the imported Ch 5
— labour gendered, continuous with domestic — portable
— Brīvbode is generative because it makes contradictions workable, not because it resolves them — portable (echoes your own “this tension does not resolve” in )
— limitations and openings — portable
So: 5 of 7 paragraphs are directly liftable. The first two need rewriting if you keep your single-practice framing.
Recommendation
Don’t adopt MIKAEL’s bundle framing wholesale. It’s a real conceptual commitment that propagates into Chapters 1, 2, 4, and 5, and your existing thesis is internally consistent around the materials/meanings/competencies framing. Adopting bundles now, this close to deadline, means rewriting more than just the intro and conclusion.
Do lift these specific things:
From the intro:
Replace your opening with MIKAEL’s (the moral-burden-on-households sentence is genuinely better)
Replace your fragmentary with MIKAEL’s clean
Lift MIKAEL’s “patchwork of routes” paragraph into your Latvian context section to absorb the work currently sitting in your
needs_revision-tagged paragraphs
From the conclusion:
Lift , , , , more or less verbatim — they don’t depend on bundle framing
For the opening of your conclusion, write a 1–2 paragraph version that uses your materials/meanings/competencies framing instead of MIKAEL’s nexus paragraph, then your existing “this tension does not resolve” line is actually a great pivot into MIKAEL’s
Want me to draft (a) the rewritten conclusion opener that bridges your Ch 4 framing into the lifted MIKAEL paragraphs, or (b) a clean merged Latvian context section?